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Farewell

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Adieu, adieu
Beginnings; anew, anew
It is now time to leave the den
Whether or not we meet again, dearest friend
I cannot cross the rift once more
I must change direction so I must soar
A harsh snapping of sinew
Adieu

Tschüs, tschüs
Perforate; astute, astute
I am but lost in a perpetual sea
I must venture to find me, belovéd family
I have to find myself at last
Capture the wind and sail the gusts of the past
Creaking tightening of the noose
Tschüs

Farewell, Farewell
Breaking; shell, shell
To grow I must walk away
Don't worry I will find a place to stay, someday
The sun sets over the horizon and I have to leave
We only seem to grow closer when we bleed
I'm trapped alone in this social cell
Farewell

Auf wiedersehen, auf wiedersehen
Here; finished, finished
Another day we will meet, don't pout
I have to follow my own route, doubt
I don't know if I will be back or not
But I promise that I'll give this door another knock
Someday I will, but this is the first ending
Auf wiedersehen
The first two stanzas, in my opinion are very powerful and I'm not sure if the other two following it up are quite up to snuff; however, I finally finished this poem. A poem of goodbyes basically, what the poem itself means and what it truly entails? I dunno, you tell me. I love seeing what other people think and how they see my works. It makes me feel all warm and toasty inside when I get good responses. Mmmhh, toasty :toast:
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NotenSMSK's avatar
The first glance revealed this is a really wonderful work :) I will look at it again when I have time and give my proper opinion!