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Haiku #4

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A petal floating
Bridge of lov
éd gaps ablaze
Burning across worlds
My 4th haiku, please tell me what you think about it and its meaning ^^
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Manigran's avatar
I think it's about two people in love and how they live in separate worlds. However, the flower petal is floating, which is helping them connect as a symbol of love.

That's my take on it. It's a beautiful haiku.