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To think at the beginning of last year it was you and I
holding hands;

you and I standing alone against the world

Now that it is a new year,

you are but a scar.

A poem I wrote about an hour after 2013 began, sorry if I am a little late submitting it. This is the 'sister' poem to "Dawn of a New Year" in a sense considering that they are both about the New Year and were basically written back to back. The third poem I wrote just after the New Year began is in a class of it's own and will be submitted when I come up with a title for it, but it's one of my favorites.

Anyway, enjoy~

And here is "Dawn of a New Year" in case you missed it:
Dawn of a New Year

It is morning, a new dawn

Birds sing tunes of joy

The wind itself hums along in delight

Perhaps this year I will end this sorry life

I know I am just simply terrible.
PearlsCat Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That last line hits you like a freight train. I absolutely love it. :)
IntricateSunlight Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, feels nice having hit someone with a freight train. I'm glad you liked it.

Also, I like your profession :D
PearlsCat Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, thanks!
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